Jack Comes To Skate...

Jack: He drives in in his nice Mercedes and gets out, he shuts the car door behind him and looks at the nice new Skate Park. He runs his hands through his hair and carries his board to the ramps, he hops on his board and does all kinds of these cool flips and turns, he does a 360 flip. He moves on to the bars and slides onto the bar, he slides off of it smoothly and professionaly. He moves to the ramps again and does more cool moves, he looks at the 4 girls and winks at 2 of them and shows off to everyone there, doing awesome moves again.

Lacey skates with davis and watches as her older sister hanna skate in
:hannah for jake:

Jack: he looked at the girl skating, and smiled, impressed by her skills.

Hannah: i see him watchin and skate along and do a heap of tricks including dropping in, ollies along the rail and sliding down the long stairs rail

Hannah: i skate past my sister and her friends and over to him
"You got some good moves" i smiled rolling slowly past him

Jack: He smiled and said "You do too" he said and started doing alot of cool tricks.

I smiled and started break dancing with my board standing the toe of the board on the ground straight in the air i stand on the axels and then flick the board and olly on to the rail slide down flip and land at the top of the ramp and i said
"DROPPING" as i slide down it

Jack: he smiled again and went to the ramps and did a 360 flip in the air, he landed on the top of the board and did a bunch more cool tricks.

The others excused themselves and left
hanna i looked around and saw it was only us
"I think i might go grab a drink " i called and headed to the kiosk

Jack: he watched her walk off and waited.

i got a drink and came back and sat on the top of the drop off to drink it

Jack: He smiled at her and said "What`s your name?."

"Hannah. My sister was here with her friends, shes a pro skater im an ex pro i quit the circuit" i smiled

Jack: "Ah, I see. I`m a pro skater too. I`m Jack by the way."

i smiled and took a slug of coke

Jack: He went to his Mercedes and turned on some music.

i finish my drink and hear the music and begin skating to it

Jack: he laughs and smiles at her.

skating around past him my board caught a loose rock and fliped me off towards him i felt myself falling

Jack: He catches her and says "Are you ok?."

"fine.....now" i smiled and got my feet under mei reached up and kissed him on the lips
"Thanks" i said

Jack: he gulped his spit and had a surprised look on his face, he grabbed his board and sat in his car, thinking about that girl for the whole time.

((?She got left standing while he run to his car???)

i watch from the park sadly knowing he didnt like me i turned droped of the high drop and skated towards the exit to skate home i wasnt hangin around to be rejected.....twice

((Oh that nenver happened. LOL! I thought she walked away, ok re-do that))

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"fine.....now" i smiled and got my feet under me i reached up and kissed him on the lips
"Thanks" i said a little shyly