Comanche searches for the 'one'

*I gallop in , looking around hoping to find the one to share my life with. After a while I realize I need to let her come to me..*

Iris: She gallops in with her shiny mane & tail, flowing through the wind, she stopped suddenly and saw the Stallion. She walked over to him and said "hello. I am Iris."

C; "Hello Im Comanche, meaning survivor" he said

Iris: "That is a beautiful, and handsome name" she said and flicked her tail letting out her scent..

"Well, Iris you are a beautiful, gorgeous mare. I was wondering if you be my mate? Someone to foal my foals and be my love" he said
"and i think you could be the 'one' "

Iris: She blushed and said "well, of course, handsome" she said being flirty. Then she reached her muzzle out and nuzzled him.

He nuzzles her "So its offical you are my mate" he said happily "I love you "he whispered

Iris: Right when she heard him say I love you it made her blush once again, then she said "I love you too" she said lovingly.

Comanche lipped at her neck

Iris: She lipped back at his neck lightly and let out more scent turning her rump towards him.

Comanche then bred her..............

I nuzzled her neck after .

Iris: She smiled and nuzzled him lightly and said "I can`t believe I actually have a mate now."

Slainte: he galloped in and stopped suddenly, and saw her daughter Iris. He nickered to her and saw the Stallion standing next to her. He galloped over to her and made Iris back up, he got infront of her and said to the other Stallion "who are you? Stay away from my daughter."

Iris: Her hoof stomped on the ground and she said "dad! Stop! He`s my mate, don`t hurt him please" she passed her dad and then stood by her mate confidently.

Comanche looked firmly at the "She is my mate, please dont take her away"

Slainte: "well I am her father, and am very protective over her! And if you are questioning me as being her father I suggest you stay away from me and her, ok?" he said meanly.

Iris: "Dad! Enough! I`m tired of you trying to protect me all the time. I`m tired of it, please please please let me be with him? He`s my first mate and I love him."

Slainte: "Fine, but if I see him or anyone else trying to hurt you I will tear them apart!" he said and walked away to graze.

Iris: She looked at Comanche and said "i`m sorry about my father, he`s just very protective over me.. After what happened to me in the past....." she said sadly.

Comanche "May I ask what happened?"

Iris: "When I was little.. There was a Stallion that was not my Father that was passing by, my mother was right beside me and I was laying down, my mother was just minding her own business and grazing, then when the Stallion saw us. He galloped over to us and my mother raised her head quickly... I got up and my mother yelled "run! Run!" and I started running as fast as I could. The reason why my mother yelled that out is because she knew that Stallion in the past. My mother was his slave ever since she was a little foal. When I was running I saw my father in the woods and yelled out to him "Daddy! Daddy! Go help mommy! Hurry!" then he ran out to help her, and right when he got there my mother was......... Dead. I ran out after 5 minutes to check on everything and saw mommy laying there with blood all around, I started crying right away frightened about daddy.. I saw Father laying down by her crying quietly. I trotted over to him and layed down by him trying to think about good things. I cried with my daddy and we layed there for a half hour worried, and hoping she would come back to life."

C: "Oh, wow.I'm so sorry, baby" he said and tryed to comfort her


-hey im busy so i might not reply back for a while, im doing things to the orphanage.-

Iris: "Oh, it`s ok. I have forgotten the past."

"So have you ever thought about being a captive horse? with those people."

Iris: "Never, I would never wanna be with humans."

"Oh." he said.

Iris: "What is it?" she said worried.....